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英语长句的译法(二)

    (2)逆序法。英语有些长句的表达次序与汉语表达习惯不同甚至完全相反这时必须从原文后面开始翻译。例如

    1. Aluminum remained unknown until the nineteenth century, because nowhere in nature is it found free, owing to its always being combined with other elements, most commonly with oxygen, for which it has a strong affinity.

    分析这个句子由一个主句两个原因状语和一个定语从句组成。“铝直到19世纪才被人发现是主句也是全句的中心内容全句共有四个谓语结构共有五层意思A. 铝直到19世纪才被人发现B. 由于在自然界找不到游离状态的铝C. 由于它总是跟其他元素结合在一起D. 最普遍的是跟氧结合E. 铝跟氧有很强的亲和力。按照汉语的表达习惯通常因在前果在后这样我们可以逆着原文的顺序把该句翻译成

    铝总是跟其他元素结合在一起最普遍的是跟氧结合因为铝跟氧有很强的亲和力由于这个原因在自然界找不到游离状态的铝。所以铝直到19世纪才被人发现。

    2. It therefore becomes more and more important that, if students are not to waste their opportunities, there will have to be much more detailed information about courses and more advice.

    分析该句由一个主句一个条件状语从句和一个宾语从句组成。“……变得越来越重要是主句也是全句的中心内容全句共有三个谓语结构包含三层含义A. ……变的越来越重要B. 如果要使学生充分利用他们的机会C. 得为他们提供大量更为详尽的信息作更多的指导。为了使译文符合汉语的表达习惯,我们也采用逆序法,翻译成:

    因此,如果要使学生充分利用他们(上大学)的机会,就得为他们提供大量关于课程的更为详尽的信息,作更多的指导。这个问题显得越来越重要了。

    下面我们再举几个实例:

    3. It is probably easier for teachers than for students to appreciate the reasons why learning English seems to become increasingly difficult once the basic structures and patterns of the language have been understood.

    一旦了解英语的基本结构和句型,再往下学似乎就越来越难了,这其中的原因,也许教师比学生更容易理解。

    4. They (the poor) are the first to experience technological progress as a curse which destroys the old muscle-power jobs that previous generations used as a means to fight their way out of poverty.

    对于以往几代人来说,旧式的体力劳动是一种用以摆脱贫困的手段,而技术的进步则摧毁了穷人赖以为生的体力劳动,因此首先体验到技术进步之害的是穷人。

    5. A great number of graduate students were driven into the intellectual slum when in the United States the intellectual poor became the classic poor, the poor under the rather romantic guise of the Beat Generation, a real phenomenon in the late fifties.

    50年代后期的美国出现了一个任何人都不可能视而不见的现象,穷知识分子以“跨掉的一代”这种颇为浪漫的姿态出现而成为美国典型的穷人,正是这个时候大批大学生被赶进了知识分子的贫民窟。

    6. Such is a human nature in the West that a great many people are often willing to sacrifice higher pay for the privilege of becoming white collar workers.

    许多人宁愿牺牲比较高的工资以换取成为白领工人的社会地位,这在西方倒是人之常情。

    7. Insects would make it impossible for us to live in the world; they would devour all our crops and kill our flocks and herds, if it were not for the protection we get from insect-eating animals.

    假如没有那些以昆虫为食的动物保护我们,昆虫将吞噬我们所有的庄稼,害死我们的牛羊家畜,使我们不能生存于世。

    (3)分句法。有时英语长句中主语或主句与修饰词的关系并不十分密切,翻译时可以按照汉语多用短句的习惯,把长句的从句或短语化成句子,分开来叙述。为了使语意连贯,有时需要适当增加词语。例如:

    1. The number of the young people in the United States who can’t read is incredible about one in four.

    上句在英语中是一个相对简单的句子,但是如果我们按照原文的句子结构死译,就可能被翻译成:

    没有阅读能力的美国青年人的数目令人难以相信约为1/4

    这样,就使得译文极为不通顺,不符合汉语的表达习惯。因此,我们应该把它译为:

    大约有1/4的美国青年人没有阅读能力,这简直令人难以置信。

    2. Television, it is often said, keeps one informed about current events, allows one to follow the latest developments in science and politics, and offers an endless series of programmes which are both instructive and entertaining.85年考题)

    分析:在此长句中,有一个插入语“it is often said”、三个并列的谓语结构,还有一个定语从句。这三个并列的谓语结构尽管在结构上属于同一个句子,但都有独立的意义,因此在翻译时,可以采用分句法,按照汉语的习惯把整个句子分解成几个独立的分句,结果为:

    人们常说,通过电视可以了解时事、掌握科学和政治的最新动态。从电视里还可以看到层出不穷、既有教育意义又有娱乐性的新节目。

    下面我们再举一个例子:

    3. All they have to do is press a button, and they can see plays, films, operas, and shows of every kind, not to mention political discussions and the latest exciting football match.85年考题)

    他们所必须做的只是按一下开关。开关一开,就可以看到电视剧、电影、歌剧以及其他各种各样的文艺节目。至于政治问题的辩论、最近的激动人心的足球赛更是不在话下。

    4. Although perhaps only 1 per cent of the life that has started somewhere will develop into highly complex and intelligent patterns, so vast is the number of planets that intelligent life is bound to be a natural part of the universe.

    虽然在某处已经开始的生命中可能仅有百分之一会发展成高度复杂、有智慧的型式,但是行星的数目如此之多,以致有智慧的生命一定是宇宙的一个天然组成部分。

    (4)综合法。上面我们讲述了英语长句的逆序法、顺序法和分句法,事实上,在翻译一个英语长句时,并不只是单纯地使用一种翻译方法,而是要求我们把各种方法综合使用,这在我们上面所举的例子中也有所体现。尤其是在一些情况下,一些英语长句单纯采用上述任何一种方法都不方便,这就需要我们的仔细分析,或按照时间的先后,或按照逻辑顺序,顺逆结合,主次分明地对全句进行综合处理,以便把英语原文翻译成通顺忠实的汉语句子。例如:

    1. People were afraid to leave their houses, for although the police had been ordered to stand by in case of emergency, they were just as confused and helpless as anybody else.

    分析:该句共有三层含义:A. 人们不敢出门;B. 尽管警察已接到命令,要作好准备以应付紧急情况;C. 警察也和其他人一样不知所措和无能为力。在这三层含义中,B表示让步,C表示原因,而A则表示结果。按照汉语习惯顺序,我们作如下的安排:

    尽管警察已接到命令,要作好准备以应付紧急情况,但人们不敢出门,因为警察也和其他人一样不知所措和无能为力。

    下面我们再举几个例子:

    2. Modern scientific and technical books, especially textbooks, requires revision at short intervals if their authors wish to keep pace with new ideas, observations and discoveries.

    对于现代书籍,特别是教科书来说,要是作者希望自己书中的内容能与新概念、新观察到的事实和新发现同步发展的话,那么就应该每隔较短的时间,将书中的内容重新修改。

    3. Taking his cue from Ibsen’s A Doll’s House, in which the heroine, Nora, leaves home because she resents her husband’s treating her like a child, the writer Lu Xun warned that Nora would need money to support herself; she must have economic rights to survive.

    易卜生的剧作《玩偶之家》中的女主人公娜拉离家出走,因为她憎恶她的丈夫像对待孩子一样来对待她。作家鲁迅从中得到启示,从而告诫人们娜拉得需要钱来养活自己,她要生存就必须有经济上的权利。

    4. Up to the present time, throughout the eighteenth and nineteenth centuries, this new tendency placed the home in the immediate suburbs, but concentrated manufacturing activity, business relations, government, and pleasure in the centers of the cities.

到目前为止,经历了1819两个世纪,这种新的倾向是把住宅安排在城市的近郊,而把生产活动、商业往来、政府部门以及娱乐场所都集中在城市的中心地区。

(来源:catti.net.cn

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