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雅思写作中让步段的概念及用法

       让步段还可以运用到讨论类的另一种结构中,笔者谓之双边倾向论证。我们通过一个具体的实例来解释这种论证结构以及让步在其中的用法。

       There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?

       考鸭网建议此题一定要认真审题,因为这个问题模式对文章的结构有着直接的影响。它有两问,第一问要回答手机的三个方面的问题,第二问优缺点讨论,结合这两问,得出文章结构如下:

       Introduction: State my opinion

       The problems of mobile phones far exceed the merits.

       Body:

       Ph 1 the benefits brought about by mobiles (Making concession)

       Convenient, functional

       Ph 2 the social, medial and technical problems of mobile phones

       Conclusion: Restate my opinion

       Although mobile phones have some benefits, the negative influences should not be overlooked.

       看完结构,不难理解双边倾向的结构即两个方面优点和缺点都提及,作者的观点是倾向其中一方的,那么不同意的那一方的论证段就可以理解为让步段。结合句式,我们可以写一下让步段的topic sentence:

       It is undeniable that mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many different ways.

       接着可以列举手机使用的几个具体的优点。这种让步和单边论证让步的区别是它可以不用直接在这个段落后面反驳。

       III 结语

       让步段在论证过程中有着相当广泛的实战意义,它可以帮助考生扩展文章的字数,达到要求,此外,它还能使得论证过程更加全面。考鸭网推荐学生准确使用此种论证方法,希望对写作取得高分有切实的帮助。

(来源:考试吧)

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